Writing a poem of a decided topic
Decide on a topic first. Please decide your current feelings, from love, way of life, of nature, etc.Friends say nonsense coined word.
The teacher pretends not to know anything outside of his specialty.
searched on the Internet
Only difficult things、lot of different information confused, time has passed. but did not write what I really wanted to know. also forgot to go to soccer cheering.
And found this site. This is the feeling you will feel from now on.
OK with this.
Some people explain similes and metaphors in a difficult way. but Words we use every day Among them there are many.
let's be poetic with similes and metaphors
stanza1
Use similes and metaphors to express meaningful words in poem.
metaphors, friends and teachers to animals or other objects.
I am a reference example I thought of,
Similes are,
"Friends as dogs" "The teacher looks like an oak tree"
If you omit "like" and "as", it is a metaphor.
"Friends are dogs, teachers are oak trees"
Will write it down.
`I asked the dog and the oak tree.''
or are,
"I didn't ask the dog and the oak tree."
stanza2
"Soccer cheering" becomes a picture.
Poetry aims to convey feelings rather than facts.
In that case, create a scene that feels unsatisfactory.
A metaphor for "writing poetry" is "soccer cheering"or "soccer"
Stanza 3
"And found this site"
It is an epilogue. Let's do it later. This is the feeling you will feel from now on. What have you found as a concrete form?
Oh! There are other ways to create. Come up with a good expression. With that phrase, we can decide on an epilogue first.
OK with this. Stanza 3 is not written, and for good reason.
Next is the topic little Just change.
to write another "not sure" or "don't know" to the story you just created.
it is decided for yourself. Its is love,life, future, old past, etc. There are many “not sure” in human relationships.
Hmm, language. Many people use sign language. OK, foreign language.
I am actually not sure about English, so I am using an online translator now.
However, not sure about English?
While writing English poems?
A poetry needs a setting that is easy to empathize with.
"Not sure Japanese" makes us feel familiar. From now on, my poem's topic is, "not sure Japanese"
Words we choose by simile, metaphor, rhyme, alliteration or association are, Somewhere, conveying a strong message together. Let's write a poem with confidence.
Now let's Writing poems while actually explaining examples
Now let's Writing poems while actually explaining examples
Words and expressions are changed.
stanza 1
Find words that sound like the words we use in metaphors.
.Other stanzas can be done similarly.
" Dog" is "dawn", "dig", "dug", "bought"
Oh! the dug. is that a hole.
"oak tree" hmm, it's "oak"
"oak", "got it", "joke", "talk"
"talkof tree..?" I want to end a sentence with a similar word. Then so "tree of oak"
「dog says nonsense coined words, dug a hole while barking」
「the oak tree pretends not to know anything outside of specialty」
Try to keep the sentences short and match the sentence endings.
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Do you know Japanese, asks dog,
Barking on hole dug.
So not sure, asks tree of oak,
Without mouths, plants don't talk.
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Edit later. Changing the order of words and changing expressions is also wordplay.
Rhymes can sometimes be unnatural. Using it is also a literary art. However, free expression is better than rhyme.
Line length and line breaks change the impression of the poem.
This seems important.
stanza2
We play with words in this stanza. Now, let's create a rhythm with similar words.
words that sound the same or come to mind. Poetry is, after all, a play on words.
It's also a good idea to look for words associated with the words you're interested in.
"Only difficult things, a lot of different information confused, time has passed. but did not write what I really wanted to know. Also forgot to go to soccer cheering."
hmm. with similar words "difficult", "different" and "did not ?"
If we compare this to soccer support,
"Soccer scoring is difficult. Time goes by with many different attacks. But I did not feel the cheers or the sweat."
This is the same feeling that I feel when "searching on the Internet".
Now let's create. Align of sentence "difficult" "different" "did not" to beginning.
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Difficult soccer to score,
Different attacks, time goes by,
did not feel cheers or sweat.
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It's unsatisfactory.
how about this? "did now to rebroadcast"
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did now to soccer rebroadcast,
difficult soccer to score,
different attacks, Time goes,
did not feel cheers or sweat.
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Hmm, I'll edit it later..
So let's support soccer directly. Stanza 3 is unlikely to be the ending.
Don't be afraid to add more stanzas or lines.
stanza3
Let's go to the soccer stadium right now.
After all, "not sure Japanese", so meet someone who can speak.
And then It felt something there. It's the language barrier.
However, the desire to support is the same.
Hmm, Japans speaker. A little more concretely Japans People.
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I met Japanese on the soccer stadium.
Soccer cheers sweat and voice.
It's the language we speak to each other.
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hmm. Use words that express feelings.cheers and sweat 。how do you express this?
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soccer stadium is the voices are fused、
Sweat turns the air into a pool.
That's our word.
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edit it later.
Stanza 4
The epilogue is conclusion. What did you get?
It's "That's our word"
I do not care about language differences. That is the answer of "not sure of Japanese"
Hmm. It feels like What humanity should be is the theme.
Aiming for a better topic is how to create a poem that rediscovers yourself.
「not sure Japanese it not care, world are if not care language differences」
Hmm, too long lines.
「not sure words, that not care world」
After that is let's think in editing.
we can also associate it here with Stanza1.
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Dogs talk to foreign dogs,
tree of oak has spread worldwide.
that not sure words,
but not care world.
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Now next, for the editing, which is the most important.
We actually edit the poems on site
stanza 1
「Do you know Japanese, asks dog,
Barking on hole dug.
So not sure, asks tree of oak,
Without mouths, plants don't talk.
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Oh, "don't talk"? It's a "won't talk", isn't it?
Improve sentence flow.「 if asks dog」「 if asks tree of oak」
Without mouths or no mouths. it well ok Because it's a poem.
Barking words are bow-wow.
After editing.
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Do you know Japanese, if ask dog,
bow-wow words in hole dug.
So not sure, if ask tree of oak,
Without mouths, plants won't talk.
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stanza 2
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did now to soccer rebroadcast,
difficult soccer to score,
different attacks, Time goes,
did not feel cheers or sweat.
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cheers or sweat, hmm. Why can't feel it?
「night family is sleeping」
I can't do it cheer loudly. "Sweat" is a word you don't need.
The word " soccer " should Better to use it only once, let's change orderof lines.
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Difficult soccer to score,
did now to rebroadcast,
different strategy goes,
did not could cheer loudly,
this night family is sleeping.
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stanza3
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Will meet Japanese at a soccer stadium,
Supporting voices are fused.
If we score a goal, we cheersed,
be taken a goal, we a yellsed.
not sure of Japanese,
but know the meaning of words.
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Purpose of going to soccer stadium, specifically「support for soccer matches」
"fused" are abstract.
「cheersed」「yellsed」hmm. Try expressing, with voice. "Yay wow!" "Noooo!"
"Japanese" it person or language?
Poems can be used in both senses, but naturally Japan's Man.
After editing
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With support for soccer matches,
meet to Japan's Man,
if score goal "Yay wow!"
if lose points "Noooo!"
not sure about Japanese,
but know what his words mean.
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Stanza 4.
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Dogs talk to foreign dogs,
tree of oak has spread worldwide.
that not sure words,
but not care world.
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Is it expressed as 「What human should」「not care language differences」is it expressed？
Let's increase the number of line.
Words Used for Suggestion "different countries"
"tree of oak has spread worldwide" how to?
It will take root and grow.
this can imply "rooted way of life".
Let's make a final statement.
「everyone are members of the earth」
After editing
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Dogs from different countries,
can talk to each others,
tree of oak spread over the world,
It's way of life that's rooted.
Not sure words, that's not care,
everyone are members of the earth.
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Newest Edited Poem
Not sure words, that's not care
Do you know Japanese, if ask dog,
bow-wow words in hole dug.
So not sure, if ask tree of oak,
Without mouths, plants won't talk.
Difficult soccer to score,
did now to rebroadcast,
different strategy goes,
did not could cheer loudly,
this night family is sleeping.
With support for soccer matches,
meet to Japan's Man,
if score goal "Yay wow!"
if lose points "Noooo!"
not sure about Japanese,
but know what his words mean.
Dogs from different countries,
can talk to each others,
tree of oak spread over the world,
It's way of life that's rooted.
Not sure words, that's not care,
everyone are members of the earth.
[There is no end to we editing]